Wednesday

Done.

Here are my final designs. The typeface has been changed and I think it is certainly for the better, giving the text more strength and more prominence. I have put all the new graphics into place which I think work well, especially the tools icons. I also like the idea that it says what difficulty level each one is, each being a variation of 'easy'. I have also applied a filter and texture to make it more stylised and more 'graphicy' but in a way that doesn't distract from the message.

One of the most important changes was to the finishing text. I added a more challenging line "Do Something Simple" as i really wanted to direct the poster at the reader and connect with them. I also changed the 'we' to "With oxfam YOU can" I did this along side adding some details on how they can act if they wish to. The reason being that I looked back at the brief and decided that was one area I hadn't covered. I feel I had engaged with the audience, challenged them, but hadn't told them exactly how they can get in touch and work with oxfam.



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